Hello Wanderers! I don’t get here as often as before, sorry. I have a favor to ask, especially of those involved in writing fiction. I wrote a short novel (novelette?) and want feedback. I can send a pdf or a epub file.
The plot involves a man who’s thinking of leaving his wife, but when he decides to make things right and stay with her, he has an accident and gets amnesia. I know, amnesia doesn’t happen as often in real life as in fiction.
Anyone want to be my “advanced readers”? Mrs. L already went through it with her fine tooth comb, so I think I’ve made the corrections.
If you want to participate, AJ has my email address, and I give him permission to give it to those who ask.
If able, I would love to help, Peter. Glad to hear you are at that point in the process.
We had a wakeful night. Bro had some suffering that seems to have resolved for the moment. I prayed through the storm and played Psalms on Audible. Thankful for that relevant resource.
Art frequently brings me food after work. On his way home last night, a dog ran out in front of his car and he hit it. The owner was really mad. If the dog was off leash, that is against our county law. If on leash, it still seems it would be the owner’s fault for not pulling the dog out of the way of the car. Am I thinking rightly about this?
Wandering Views 
Good morning. Cold with some snowflakes currently. Ready for some warmer weather before the real heat comes.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hello Wanderers! I don’t get here as often as before, sorry. I have a favor to ask, especially of those involved in writing fiction. I wrote a short novel (novelette?) and want feedback. I can send a pdf or a epub file.
The plot involves a man who’s thinking of leaving his wife, but when he decides to make things right and stay with her, he has an accident and gets amnesia. I know, amnesia doesn’t happen as often in real life as in fiction.
Anyone want to be my “advanced readers”? Mrs. L already went through it with her fine tooth comb, so I think I’ve made the corrections.
If you want to participate, AJ has my email address, and I give him permission to give it to those who ask.
Thank you for indulging in my self promotion.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Good for you, Peter.
LikeLiked by 1 person
If able, I would love to help, Peter. Glad to hear you are at that point in the process.
We had a wakeful night. Bro had some suffering that seems to have resolved for the moment. I prayed through the storm and played Psalms on Audible. Thankful for that relevant resource.
LikeLike
Art frequently brings me food after work. On his way home last night, a dog ran out in front of his car and he hit it. The owner was really mad. If the dog was off leash, that is against our county law. If on leash, it still seems it would be the owner’s fault for not pulling the dog out of the way of the car. Am I thinking rightly about this?
LikeLike