Hello Wanderers! I don’t get here as often as before, sorry. I have a favor to ask, especially of those involved in writing fiction. I wrote a short novel (novelette?) and want feedback. I can send a pdf or a epub file.
The plot involves a man who’s thinking of leaving his wife, but when he decides to make things right and stay with her, he has an accident and gets amnesia. I know, amnesia doesn’t happen as often in real life as in fiction.
Anyone want to be my “advanced readers”? Mrs. L already went through it with her fine tooth comb, so I think I’ve made the corrections.
If you want to participate, AJ has my email address, and I give him permission to give it to those who ask.
If able, I would love to help, Peter. Glad to hear you are at that point in the process.
We had a wakeful night. Bro had some suffering that seems to have resolved for the moment. I prayed through the storm and played Psalms on Audible. Thankful for that relevant resource.
Art frequently brings me food after work. On his way home last night, a dog ran out in front of his car and he hit it. The owner was really mad. If the dog was off leash, that is against our county law. If on leash, it still seems it would be the owner’s fault for not pulling the dog out of the way of the car. Am I thinking rightly about this?
Morning! 5 inches of moisture with a couple of those melting in on impact. Lots of shush around here… truly thankful!
Peter we have some wonderful writers hereJanice, M and Cheryl! Good resources. Looking forward to it’s publishing!
How sad Janice about Art and the dog. Unleashed is definitely a no no in town. Even if owner had it leashed they should have the dog on a tight leash when around people or cars. I have had situations where the owner had the leash fully extended to about 10 ft … owner on one side of the road dog on the other. They are supposed to have the dog in their control at all times. 🥲🙏
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Good morning. Cold with some snowflakes currently. Ready for some warmer weather before the real heat comes.
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Hello Wanderers! I don’t get here as often as before, sorry. I have a favor to ask, especially of those involved in writing fiction. I wrote a short novel (novelette?) and want feedback. I can send a pdf or a epub file.
The plot involves a man who’s thinking of leaving his wife, but when he decides to make things right and stay with her, he has an accident and gets amnesia. I know, amnesia doesn’t happen as often in real life as in fiction.
Anyone want to be my “advanced readers”? Mrs. L already went through it with her fine tooth comb, so I think I’ve made the corrections.
If you want to participate, AJ has my email address, and I give him permission to give it to those who ask.
Thank you for indulging in my self promotion.
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Good for you, Peter.
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If able, I would love to help, Peter. Glad to hear you are at that point in the process.
We had a wakeful night. Bro had some suffering that seems to have resolved for the moment. I prayed through the storm and played Psalms on Audible. Thankful for that relevant resource.
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Art frequently brings me food after work. On his way home last night, a dog ran out in front of his car and he hit it. The owner was really mad. If the dog was off leash, that is against our county law. If on leash, it still seems it would be the owner’s fault for not pulling the dog out of the way of the car. Am I thinking rightly about this?
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Morning! 5 inches of moisture with a couple of those melting in on impact. Lots of shush around here… truly thankful!
Peter we have some wonderful writers hereJanice, M and Cheryl! Good resources. Looking forward to it’s publishing!
How sad Janice about Art and the dog. Unleashed is definitely a no no in town. Even if owner had it leashed they should have the dog on a tight leash when around people or cars. I have had situations where the owner had the leash fully extended to about 10 ft … owner on one side of the road dog on the other. They are supposed to have the dog in their control at all times. 🥲🙏
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The man called Art this morning and apologized and said he knew it was his fault. The dog is okay. PTL!
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Thankful for the dog being ok and for the man’s humble response! ❣️
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